I appreciate you reading onehunna, Your feedback, is constructive and appropriate. Thank you. I'll likely not revise this, but I will take those suggestions with me in to my next effort.

I wanted to record music last night but was too lazy to set up any of the gear. Still needing to scratch my creative itch, I decided to write this. I've begun to enjoy writing these small little "vignettes of life" and I think I'll continue when the urge strikes.

I have enjoyed reading your work and look forward to you posting more. I wrote about euthanizing my childhood dog a while back and it lit a fire in me that has been growing ever since.

lil has been great in helping with grammar issues (of which I have far too many) and with suggestions. I don't ever expect to make a profession of writing fiction, but it sure is fun.

I post some of my random music creations under the #tng tag. I also create the #tngpodcast, where I interview people from the Hubski community and steve puts them to video. Check out the one on running or if it's more your speed, the one of Space. These require me to write, but in a much different way.

My point is, that I try and have many avenues to create with and writing fiction is a new one for me. I apprecaite the encouragement.