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lil  ·  4011 days ago  ·  link  ·    ·  parent  ·  post: Can you come up with the first line of a novel/story?

For fun, can you give a few selected people editing rights on your first lines?





thenewgreen  ·  4011 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Done. I have made you and a few others editors on this post.

humanodon  ·  4010 days ago  ·  link  ·  

So, submit ideas in the thread or edit the ones up top? I don't know what to do . . .

thenewgreen  ·  4010 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Ask lil. I'm just a monkey.

lil  ·  4010 days ago  ·  link  ·  

I originally had some ideas for changing some words in tng's opening suggestions and hoped that more ideas would show up on top to play with, but this ended up taking on its own narrative.

humanodon  ·  4010 days ago  ·  link  ·  

Oh, ok.