I thought we could use a different perspective than just Ashley's which is why I brought in Pak. I think their two experiences should be able to converge nicely. Excited to see where this heads. You are right, that is a lot of characters. Don't forget Daryl Houseman, we've only heard of him, but I guess it still counts. Also, I don't think I conveyed this well, but my intention is that Pak is seeing Ashley run away from the chancellor in pursuit of her antler. Kind of a rewind showing the event from his perspective.Also, at this point in the story, it is night (night fell like, 3 times before lil edited it)
HA! Thanks for compiling this, you rule.
Oh right, crap. Well, you brought the brother in right at the beginning ("nuke'em") right? Anyway, keeping track of this stuff is what a single person would do (and have trouble with) while writing a story, I know I have. Hopefully it'll help us! Edit: List updated
Yep, I sort of always thought I'd like to bring her brother in to it. I would also mention in your notes, which I think are very valuable btw, the marbles that were left to Pak by his grandfather. Thanks for the compliment on the names. I just looked up native american remedies and they stuck out to me as interesting names for herbs/roots.